Quote from Anne Frank: Diary of a Young Girl.

"It’s difficult in times like these: ideals, dreams and cherished hopes rise within us, only to be crushed by grim reality. It’s a wonder I haven’t abandoned all my ideals, they seem so absurd and impractical. Yet I cling to them because I still believe, in spite of everything, that people are truly good at heart."

Think about the trials that faced Anne Frank, her family, and all people affected by the Holocaust. Also consider crimes against human rights that still exist today and the people and institutions who fight against these crimes. Taking all of this into consideration, do you believe Anne Frank was right, and “…people are truly good at heart”?

Sentence 1: Claim- What do you think? Answer the question in the prompt. Do you believe Anne Frank was right, and “…people are truly good at heart”?

Sentences 2-4: Evidence and Reasoning- What evidence do you have to support your claim? Why do you feel this way?

Sentences 5-7: Evidence and Reasoning- What evidence do you have to support your claim? Why do you feel this way?

Sentences 8-10: Conclusion- Why is your opinion on this question correct? Explain why you are right (either that people are truly good at heart/bad at heart/a mix of good and bad). For an 8th grader.

1 answer

Claim: I believe Anne Frank was right when she said that “…people are truly good at heart.”

Evidence and Reasoning: Despite the horrors of the Holocaust and other tragic events in history, many people risked their lives to help others. For example, some individuals hid Jewish families from the Nazis, showing kindness and bravery in the face of danger. This demonstrates that, even in dark times, some people can choose compassion over fear.

Evidence and Reasoning: Additionally, today we see many organizations and individuals fighting against human rights abuses around the world. Groups like Amnesty International work tirelessly to protect those whose rights are being violated, proving that there are people who care deeply about justice and helping others. This continued effort to make the world a better place reflects a belief in the goodness of humanity.

Conclusion: My opinion that people are truly good at heart is backed up by historical and modern examples of kindness and bravery. While there are undoubtedly bad actions in the world, the existence of those who stand up for what is right suggests that most people have a capacity for goodness. Anne Frank’s hope, despite her circumstances, reminds us that even in the worst situations, the goodness within people can shine through.