(1) Those of you who dislike the taste of water do not have to drink Gatorade after exercising. (2) After conducting a study, it has been found that skim milk is actually better than sports drinks. (3) It has all of the protein, vitamins, and sugar you need for your body to recover.

Question

Which of these is the best way to revise sentence 2 to make it a clear and effective sentence?
A.
Skim milk is actually better than sports drinks after conducting a study.
B.
Researchers have found that skim milk is actually better than sports drinks after conducting a study.
C.
After conducting a study, skim milk is actually better than sports drinks.
D.
After conducting a study, researchers have found that skim milk is actually better than sports drinks.

Answer 1

The best way to revise sentence 2 to make it a clear and effective sentence is:

D. After conducting a study, researchers have found that skim milk is actually better than sports drinks.

This revision clearly identifies who conducted the study (researchers) and presents the information in a logical manner, improving clarity and effectiveness.