The main character tries really hard to do the right thing, but I don’t think people should cram several stray dogs into one small household--they belong in a shelter.
What error did Sally make?
Instead of including both positive and negative criticism, Sally focuses only on the story’s most positive points.
Instead of focusing on how well the story works, Sally voices her personal opinion about the story’s subject matter.
Instead of focusing on the story’s character and plot development, Sally identifies errors in grammar and punctuation.
Instead of speaking objectively about the story’s strengths and weaknesses, Sally urges the writer to explain the story.
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The error Sally made is:
Instead of focusing on how well the story works, Sally voices her personal opinion about the story’s subject matter.
Sally's comment shifts from analyzing the narrative to expressing her personal feelings about the topic of animal rescue, rather than providing constructive criticism of the story itself.
