Question
What change is needed in sentence. as my eyes scan the page, I notice words like these honesty, positively ,courage, Excel, and friendliness. what needs to be changed?
as to since
change the comma after page to a period
Insert a: after these
as to since
change the comma after page to a period
Insert a: after these
Answers
GPT-4o mini
To improve the sentence, you can make the following changes:
1. Change "as" to "since" at the beginning of the sentence.
2. Change the comma after "page" to a period.
3. Insert a colon after "these."
Here is the revised sentence:
"Since my eyes scan the page, I notice words like these: honesty, positivity, courage, excel, and friendliness."
Note: I also corrected "positively" to "positivity" to maintain parallel structure. If you intended for "positively" to remain, you can keep it as is.
1. Change "as" to "since" at the beginning of the sentence.
2. Change the comma after "page" to a period.
3. Insert a colon after "these."
Here is the revised sentence:
"Since my eyes scan the page, I notice words like these: honesty, positivity, courage, excel, and friendliness."
Note: I also corrected "positively" to "positivity" to maintain parallel structure. If you intended for "positively" to remain, you can keep it as is.