Certainly! Your poem contains several poetic elements and figurative language.
Poetic Element:
- Imagery: The lines evoke vivid visual images like "stars so bright like diamonds in the sky," allowing readers to visualize the beauty and brightness associated with love.
Figurative Language:
- Simile: The comparison of stars to diamonds in the line "Stars so bright like diamonds in the sky" uses "like" to draw a parallel between the two, enhancing the imagery.
- Personification: In "shadows dance" and "shadows play," the shadows are given human-like qualities, which adds to the atmosphere of Verona and the setting of love and romance.
Your poem beautifully captures the theme of love while utilizing these elements and devices to enrich its meaning.