To determine the best choices that describe how Haidri revises the structure of her poem "Lottery" from the initial Journal Entry to her Final Draft, let's analyze the options:
- A: Haidri changes long lines in her Journal Entry to short lines in her Final Draft to make her ideas more concise.
- B: Haidri shifts from past tense in her Journal Entry to present tense in her Final Draft to provide a different perspective.
- C: Haidri includes additional sentences to elaborate on ideas in her Final Draft that are not included in her Journal Entry.
- D: Haidri combines sentences in her Journal Entry into complete paragraphs in her Final Draft to clarify ideas.
- E: Haidri introduces the main ideas in the Final Draft in a different order from what appears in the Journal Entry.
Considering the nature of revising poetry and the potential revisions mentioned:
- Choices A and C indicate changes in line length and the addition of new content, which could be plausible revisions.
- Choices B and D indicate shifts in tense and the combination of sentences into paragraphs, which might not be typical in poetry revisions.
- Choices C and E imply elaboration and reordering of ideas, which are common practices in revision.
Given the context of poetry, where conciseness, clarity, and the order of ideas can significantly impact interpretation, A and C likely best describe structural changes in Haidri's work.
Therefore, the best answer is A and C.
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