Question

The gloom inside the house enveloped me as I stepped through the door. All around I could hear stealthy footsteps and ominous creaking. As an unearthly cry filled the room, I let out my own cry of dread.

What effect do the words with strong connotations have on this passage? make the writing short

Answer 1

The words with strong connotations—like "gloom," "stealthy," "ominous," "unearthly," and "cry of dread"—create a vivid sense of fear and tension. They evoke an atmosphere of unease and anticipation, immersing the reader in a foreboding environment where danger seems imminent. This choice of language heightens the overall emotional impact, drawing readers into the protagonist's terror.