To increase the story's pace the most, the best option would be:
"Suddenly, Leah jumped. 'A kitten!' she exclaimed."
This set of sentences conveys a quick action and immediate excitement, maintaining a brisk flow in the narrative.
To increase the story's pace the most, the best option would be:
"Suddenly, Leah jumped. 'A kitten!' she exclaimed."
This set of sentences conveys a quick action and immediate excitement, maintaining a brisk flow in the narrative.