does my attitude in this essay i wrote reflect Deadpool vibes (and also is the amount of words in here decent enough for an 8th grade essay?)

I'd be happy to help you assess the attitude of your essay and its word count! Please share the essay with me, and I'll provide feedback on both aspects.

The U.S.-Mexico War was justified by the fact that when America tried to expand, Mexico suppressed the Texans who settled, and America was not going to stand by and watch its own citizens get mistreated by foreign nations. With the spreading expansion of America’s territory in the early 19th century, it was inevitable that a war would eventually occur. As America’s land fever spread, in the mid-1800s Texas became a great place to settle. People established towns and houses to live in, but sooner or later the Mexican citizens would get frustrated with the Americans in their territory. The cultural differences, preferences, and other such things as languages and slavery perspectives were just too much. It would eventually get out of hand. Mexico began enforcing more harsh laws on the immigrants, and soon enough, Texas was declaring independence. However, Mexico considered this an act of aggression, and soon enough America had a war on its hands. This was mainly because of Manifest Destiny.
According to ‘The History of Mexico’ by Burton Corkwood, Greenwood Press,2000, the U.S.-Mexican War, “Following the Louisiana Purchase in 1803 and the doubling of U.S. territory, many Americans had looked at the region controlled first by Spain and, after 1821, by Mexico as a logical area for U.S. expansion. After the territory’s experimentation with independence, the United States annexed Texas in 1845.”
‘Manifest Destiny’ was the idea that the United States was supposed to expand across North America. This is one of the reasons America was justified to go along with the war: It’s the classic ‘This is MY land! GET OFF MY LAWN!’ kind of dispute. It lead to the Idea that expansion was a right, not a privilege. It took a lot of struggles, captives, and treaties to get it to work. Many attempts failed, such as the Treaties of Velasco, which both armies refused to accept. Thus, the treaties were broken, and the war continued.
According to the Texas State Library and Archive Commissions’ ‘The Treaties of Velasco’ “On May 26, General Vicente Filisola began withdrawing Mexican troops in fulfillment of the public treaty. However, the Texas army blocked Santa Anna’s release by the Texas government. Moreover, the Mexican government refused to accept the treaties on the grounds that Santa Anna had signed them as a captive. Since the treaties had now been violated by both sides, they never took effect. Mexico was not to recognize Texas independence until the U.S.-Mexican War was settled by the Treaty of Guadalupe Hidalgo in 1848.”
Overall, Texas is famous for the Battle of the Alamo, which was one of the major points in the war. Although everybody in the Alamo died, America eventually won the War. One of many famous and brave people who fought in the U.S.-Mexican War is Davy Crockett. Heroes like him, who believed in the rights of freedom and expansion, fought hard and made America what it is today.

Your essay on the U.S.-Mexico War provides a clear argument and good historical context. Here’s a breakdown of the two aspects you asked for: Deadpool vibes and word count.

Deadpool Vibes:

Deadpool is known for his irreverent humor, sarcasm, self-awareness, and a bit of chaos. To reflect that vibe in your essay, you might consider the following adjustments:

1. Tone and Humor: Adding witty remarks or a more casual tone could invoke the Deadpool style. Instead of stating facts straightforwardly, try using metaphors or humorous analogies. For instance, when discussing Manifest Destiny, you could phrase it as “It was like the U.S. had a massive land-hankering—think of it as the land equivalent of someone raiding a fridge at 2 AM.”

2. Self-Referential Moments: Include some moments where you acknowledge the gravity of the subject in a lighthearted way. For instance, you could end with something like, “And the moral of the story is: if you’re gonna take a piece of land, you better be ready for a good old-fashioned throwdown.”

3. Character Elements: You could also integrate a playful critique of the characters involved, joking about their motivations or decisions in a way that captures Deadpool’s spirit.

Word Count:

Your essay looks to be around 640 words, which is a decent length for an 8th-grade assignment. Typically, 8th-grade essays range from 400 to 800 words, depending on the complexity of the topic and the requirements of the assignment. You should be within an acceptable limit, especially if your teacher has not specified a certain word count.

Overall Suggestions:

• Consider introducing a playful hook or ending to bookend the essay with a more engaging perspective.
• Review your transitions and ensure clarity while maintaining humor.
• Make sure to balance any humor with the seriousness of the topic, so you don’t lose the emphasis on the historical significance.

If you’d like help with specific edits or additions to make it feel more in line with the Deadpool vibe, feel free to ask!

no, its 495 words.

Thank you for the correction! A word count of 495 words is still very much acceptable for an 8th-grade essay. It provides enough space for you to present your arguments and supporting details without feeling overly lengthy.

Summary:

1. Word Count: At 495 words, you're well within the typical range for an 8th-grade essay (400-800 words).

2. Deadpool Vibes: If you want to inject that irreverent tone, consider adding humor, witty commentary, or playful metaphors—especially in sections where you describe events or decisions.

Example Additions:

Here are a couple of example lines you might add for that "Deadpool-esque" touch:

• When mentioning the cultural clash: “It was a little like inviting a cat to a dog show—everyone had their own idea of how things should go, and it got messy fast.”

• In the conclusion, you might say: “So, while Texas is known for barbecue and big hats now, back in the day, it was the scene of a real-life showdown that would make any superhero proud. Just remember, folks: history doesn’t always come with a happy ending.”

If you want more specific suggestions or help with revisions to fit that vibe, let me know!