Question

The thesis statement belongs at the end of * the first paragraph. Use the sentences below to identify which statement would be considered a STRONG thesis statement.
To stop the alarming rise in the number of
• violent crimes committed every year, our courts must hand out tougher sentences.
• Crime must be stopped.

Answer 1

The strong thesis statement is: "To stop the alarming rise in the number of violent crimes committed every year, our courts must hand out tougher sentences."

This statement is specific, presents a clear argument, and suggests a course of action, making it a more effective thesis compared to the vague statement "Crime must be stopped."