Question

The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics.
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Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?
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• add "like maniacs" after "shouted"
• replace "hours" with "the rest of my life"
• replace "rocked" with "was on fire"
• add "at the top of our lungs" after "shouted"

Answer 1

The revision that would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid is:

• replace "hours" with "the rest of my life"

This change exaggerates the lasting effect of the loud music on your ears, emphasizing the intensity of the experience.