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The electoral college was an Pragmatic, Compromise between these afraid of an uniform electorate and those afraid of a domenading Congress, so a system were created to balance Popular vote and state influence.

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Here is the corrected version of the sentence, with the errors identified:

Original Sentence:
The electoral college was an Pragmatic, Compromise between these afraid of an uniform electorate and those afraid of a domenading Congress, so a system were created to balance Popular vote and state influence.

Errors Identified:

  1. "an Pragmatic" → "a pragmatic" (should be "a" instead of "an," and "Pragmatic" should not be capitalized).
  2. "Compromise" → "compromise" (should not be capitalized).
  3. "these afraid of" → "those who were afraid of" (the phrase is unclear; it should specify 'those' and 'who were' for grammatical correctness).
  4. "an uniform" → "a uniform" (should be "a" instead of "an").
  5. "domenading" → "domineering" (correct spelling; "domenading" should be "domineering").
  6. "so a system were created" → "so a system was created" (should be "was" instead of "were" for subject-verb agreement).
  7. "balance Popular vote" → "balance the popular vote" (should include "the" and lowercase "popular").
  8. Addition of missing commas: Consider adding a comma after "Congress" for clarity.
  9. Overall structure: The sentence could be restructured for greater clarity and coherence.
  10. Wordiness: The phrase "between those who were afraid of" could be simplified, perhaps to "between those fearing."

Corrected Sentence:
The electoral college was a pragmatic compromise between those who were afraid of a uniform electorate and those fearing a domineering Congress, so a system was created to balance the popular vote and state influence.

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