Beautiful Joe by Marshall Saunders Mrs. Morris stood looking after her with a beaming face, and I began to think that I should like Mrs. Montague, too, if I knew her long enough. Two days later I was quite sure I should, for I had a proof that she really liked me. When her little boy, Charlie, came to the house, he brought something for me done up in white paper. Mrs. Morris opened it, and there was a handsome nickel-plated collar, with my name on it—Beautiful Joe. From Beautiful Joe by Marshall Saunders Question Use this paragraph from Beautiful Joe to answer the question. How would this paragraph be revised to establish a second-person point of view? (1 point) Responses using an all-knowing narrator using an all-knowing narrator using a neutral narrator using a neutral narrator using the pronouns he, she, or they in place of I using the pronouns he, she , or they in place of I using the pronoun you in place of I

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Beautiful Joe by Marshall Saunders Mrs. Morris stood looking after her with a beaming face, and I began to think that I should like Mrs. Montague, too, if I knew her long enough. Two days later I was quite sure I should, for I had a proof that she really liked me. When her little boy, Charlie, came to the house, he brought something for me done up in white paper. Mrs. Morris opened it, and there was a handsome nickel-plated collar, with my name on it—Beautiful Joe. From Beautiful Joe by Marshall Saunders Question Use this paragraph from Beautiful Joe to answer the question. How would this paragraph be revised to establish a second-person point of view? (1 point) Responses using an all-knowing narrator using an all-knowing narrator using a neutral narrator using a neutral narrator using the pronouns he, she, or they in place of I using the pronouns he, she , or they in place of I using the pronoun you in place of I

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To revise the given paragraph from Beautiful Joe to establish a second-person point of view, you would change the perspective so that it directly addresses the reader using the pronoun "you." Here’s how the paragraph might be revised:

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You stood looking after her with a beaming face, and you began to think that you would like Mrs. Montague, too, if you knew her long enough. Two days later, you were quite sure you would, for you had proof that she really liked you. When her little boy, Charlie, came to the house, he brought something for you done up in white paper. Mrs. Morris opened it, and there was a handsome nickel-plated collar, with your name on it—Beautiful Joe.

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This revision places the reader in the narrative, making the experience more immediate and personal.