Question
did i punctuate this sentence correctly?
"They wanted to have the woman give birth to healthy babies, but they wanted to get as much work out of the woman as possible; therefore, the women were given lighter tasks."
"They wanted to have the woman give birth to healthy babies, but they wanted to get as much work out of the woman as possible; therefore, the women were given lighter tasks."
Answers
Ms. Sue
It's too long.
You could make it two sentences, or you could reword it.
You could make it two sentences, or you could reword it.