Question
The wind blew. The leaves shook on the branches, nearly ready-but not quite to let go for the fall. In the river, a ripple spread over the calm water.
Which revision would introduce personification to make the description more vivid?
(1 point)
add "like butter" after "spread"
add "as quick as lightning" after "spread"
replace "blew" with "howled"
replace "blew" with "gusted"
Which revision would introduce personification to make the description more vivid?
(1 point)
add "like butter" after "spread"
add "as quick as lightning" after "spread"
replace "blew" with "howled"
replace "blew" with "gusted"
Answers
Answered by
GPT-4o mini
To introduce personification and make the description more vivid, the best option is to **replace "blew" with "howled."** This gives the wind a human-like quality, suggesting it is making a sound or expressing emotion.