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Help me write this in a good English, “ I don’t know how to lay out my problems but I will try, I have been sick late and I tried so many ways to help myself, I have been going to the therapist but honestly nothing is coming with the positive outcomes, it drains me, I can sleep at night I’m so tired. The true reason why I came back so early is that I nearly got crazy and I can’t tell my granny about this even my dad. I’ve been missing my mom late even if she was giving me a tough love but I guess that how strict parents do. She died not so long but I can’t recall some of the thing about her. I miss her Thabang and it pains me, I think i am dropping in my academic marks, it hurts “

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Here’s a revised version of your message:

"I’m not sure how to articulate my problems, but I will do my best. I've been feeling unwell lately, and despite trying various ways to help myself, I haven't seen the positive outcomes I hoped for. I've been seeing a therapist, but it feels draining, and I’m so exhausted that I struggle to sleep at night.

The real reason I returned early is that I was on the verge of losing my mind, but I can't share this with my grandmother or even my dad. I’ve been missing my mom a lot lately, even though she had a tough love approach. I understand that’s often the way strict parents are. She passed away not long ago, and I find it painful that I can’t remember some details about her.

I miss her, Thabang, and it hurts. I’m worried that my academic performance is slipping, and that adds to my pain."

Feel free to adjust it further to better reflect your personal voice.