Question
Help me write this in a good English, “ I don’t know how to lay out my problems but I will try, I have been sick late and I tried so many ways to help myself, I have been going to the therapist but honestly nothing is coming with the positive outcomes, it drains me, I can sleep at night I’m so tired. The true reason why I came back so early is that I nearly got crazy and I can’t tell my granny about this even my dad. I’ve been missing my mom late even if she was giving me a tough love but I guess that how strict parents do. She died not so long but I can’t recall some of the thing about her. I miss her Thabang and it pains me, I think i am dropping in my academic marks, it hurts “
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GPT-4o mini
Here’s a revised version of your message:
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"I’m not sure how to articulate my problems, but I will do my best. I've been feeling unwell lately, and despite trying various ways to help myself, I haven't seen the positive outcomes I hoped for. I've been seeing a therapist, but it feels draining, and I’m so exhausted that I struggle to sleep at night.
The real reason I returned early is that I was on the verge of losing my mind, but I can't share this with my grandmother or even my dad. I’ve been missing my mom a lot lately, even though she had a tough love approach. I understand that’s often the way strict parents are. She passed away not long ago, and I find it painful that I can’t remember some details about her.
I miss her, Thabang, and it hurts. I’m worried that my academic performance is slipping, and that adds to my pain."
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Feel free to adjust it further to better reflect your personal voice.
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"I’m not sure how to articulate my problems, but I will do my best. I've been feeling unwell lately, and despite trying various ways to help myself, I haven't seen the positive outcomes I hoped for. I've been seeing a therapist, but it feels draining, and I’m so exhausted that I struggle to sleep at night.
The real reason I returned early is that I was on the verge of losing my mind, but I can't share this with my grandmother or even my dad. I’ve been missing my mom a lot lately, even though she had a tough love approach. I understand that’s often the way strict parents are. She passed away not long ago, and I find it painful that I can’t remember some details about her.
I miss her, Thabang, and it hurts. I’m worried that my academic performance is slipping, and that adds to my pain."
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Feel free to adjust it further to better reflect your personal voice.