(1) In "The Gettysburg Address," Abraham Lincoln says, "the brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract." He believes that the world has taken notice of the battle but that the war is far from over. (2) He urges that it is "for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining . . . that this nation . . ." He hopes that others will continue to fight for the freedom of all men. (3) Finally, he is determined to make sure that, "these dead shall not have died in vain."

Identify whether each quotation is formatted correctly, and, if not, how it needs to be improved.

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Let's review the quotations in your text for proper formatting according to standard conventions for quoting from a speech or text. Here's an analysis of each quotation provided:

Quotation 1: Quote: "the brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract."

  • Analysis: This quotation is correctly formatted as it includes quotation marks around the exact words spoken by Lincoln. However, it should also include a citation or a reference to its source for a complete academic standard (e.g., mention it as being from the Gettysburg Address).

Quotation 2: Quote: "for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining . . . that this nation . . ."

  • Analysis: This quotation has correct punctuation with the use of ellipses to indicate omitted text. However, it is again important to include the context of where this quote originated (the Gettysburg Address) for clarity and completeness.

Quotation 3: Quote: "these dead shall not have died in vain."

  • Analysis: This quotation is formatted correctly with quotation marks. Like the others, it would benefit from context to specify that it is a quote from Lincoln's Gettysburg Address.

Summary of Improvements:

  • Each quotation should include proper citation regarding its source (e.g., "Abraham Lincoln, Gettysburg Address") so that readers understand the origin of the quotes.
  • Consider providing context around the quotations if these are presented in a larger work or essay.

In conclusion, the quotations themselves are generally well formatted; the key improvement needed is the addition of citations and context to enhance their clarity and academic integrity.