Asked by Anonymous
Dangling Modifiers If your baby does not like cold apple juice, it should be heated.
Your answer: 1. If your baby does not like cold apple juice you should heat it.
Dangling Modifiers When they are fresh, eating oranges can often keep away the cold virus.
Your answer: 2. When oranges are fresh they can often keep away a cold virus.
Predication Our plans for tomorrow should begin today.
Your answer: 3. No Change
Punctuating Sentences The dinner party will begin at 8 o’clock sharp.
Your answer: 4.
No Change
Punctuating Sentences Without a doubt, cramming for the test.
Your answer: 5. Without a doubt you will be cramming for the test.
Punctuating Sentences He took the curve too sharply, it caused an accident.
Your answer: 6. He took the curve to sharply, and it caused an accident.
Punctuation—Colon The ingredients for my favorite grilled sandwich are: peanut butter and bananas.
Your answer: 7. The ingrediants for my favorite grilled sandwiches are peanut butter, and bananas.
Punctuation—Colon Studying is exciting: find something about the subject that interests you, and resolve to become an expert.
Your answer: 8. Studying is exciting: find something about the subject that interest you and resolve to become an expert.
Punctuation—Dash Pens come in all shapes—my favorite is an ergonomic one shaped like a wishbone.
Your answer: 9. Pens come in all shapes my favorite is an ergonomic one shaped like a wishbone.
Punctuation—Hyphen She ate two thirds of the pie in one sitting!
Your answer: 10. She ate two-thirds of the pie in one sitting.
Punctuation—Hyphen The high rise building is located at 3114 Main Street.
Your answer: 11. The high-rise building is located at 3114 Main Street.
Punctuation—Parentheses The blouse did not fit properly. (You will find it in this package.)
Your answer: 12. No Change
Punctuation—Square Brackets The article about American history stated, “The revolution began over a beer [during Prohibition] and ended with a bang.”
Your answer: 13. No change
Inclusive Language—Nonsexist Language
We need more manpower to finish the job on schedule.
Your answer: 14. We need more employees to finish the job on schedule.
Inclusive Language—Nonracist and Nonagist Language
The woman who earned the award was a Negro from Louisiana.
Your answer: 15. The person who earned the award was from Louisiana.
Inclusive Language—Nonracist and Nonagist Language
It seems that every Golden Ager is on the bus trip to Laughlin, Nevada.
Your answer: 16. It seems that alot of people were on the bus trip to Laughlin,Nevada.
Inclusive Language—Talking about People with Disabilities and Disease
The blind people were downtown for a national conference.
Your answer: 17. There were alot of people downtown for a national conference.
Inclusive Language—Talking about People with Disabilities and Disease
His sister is afflicted with polio and muscular dystrophy, so she is confined to a wheelchair.
Your answer: 18. His sister is confined to a wheelchair.
Inclusive Language—Quoting from Biased Material The mayors and their wives were invited on a tour of the state buildings.
Your answer: 19. The political parties and their families were on a tour of the state buildings.
Inclusive Language—Quoting from Biased Material
Back in the 1400s, the laws governing the people were quite specific: “All men shall tithe 10% to the church and pay taxes every six months. All men can attend school until they are 16 years of age.”
Your answer: 20. No Change
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Your answer: 1. If your baby does not like cold apple juice you should heat it.
Dangling Modifiers When they are fresh, eating oranges can often keep away the cold virus.
Your answer: 2. When oranges are fresh they can often keep away a cold virus.
Predication Our plans for tomorrow should begin today.
Your answer: 3. No Change
Punctuating Sentences The dinner party will begin at 8 o’clock sharp.
Your answer: 4.
No Change
Punctuating Sentences Without a doubt, cramming for the test.
Your answer: 5. Without a doubt you will be cramming for the test.
Punctuating Sentences He took the curve too sharply, it caused an accident.
Your answer: 6. He took the curve to sharply, and it caused an accident.
Punctuation—Colon The ingredients for my favorite grilled sandwich are: peanut butter and bananas.
Your answer: 7. The ingrediants for my favorite grilled sandwiches are peanut butter, and bananas.
Punctuation—Colon Studying is exciting: find something about the subject that interests you, and resolve to become an expert.
Your answer: 8. Studying is exciting: find something about the subject that interest you and resolve to become an expert.
Punctuation—Dash Pens come in all shapes—my favorite is an ergonomic one shaped like a wishbone.
Your answer: 9. Pens come in all shapes my favorite is an ergonomic one shaped like a wishbone.
Punctuation—Hyphen She ate two thirds of the pie in one sitting!
Your answer: 10. She ate two-thirds of the pie in one sitting.
Punctuation—Hyphen The high rise building is located at 3114 Main Street.
Your answer: 11. The high-rise building is located at 3114 Main Street.
Punctuation—Parentheses The blouse did not fit properly. (You will find it in this package.)
Your answer: 12. No Change
Punctuation—Square Brackets The article about American history stated, “The revolution began over a beer [during Prohibition] and ended with a bang.”
Your answer: 13. No change
Inclusive Language—Nonsexist Language
We need more manpower to finish the job on schedule.
Your answer: 14. We need more employees to finish the job on schedule.
Inclusive Language—Nonracist and Nonagist Language
The woman who earned the award was a Negro from Louisiana.
Your answer: 15. The person who earned the award was from Louisiana.
Inclusive Language—Nonracist and Nonagist Language
It seems that every Golden Ager is on the bus trip to Laughlin, Nevada.
Your answer: 16. It seems that alot of people were on the bus trip to Laughlin,Nevada.
Inclusive Language—Talking about People with Disabilities and Disease
The blind people were downtown for a national conference.
Your answer: 17. There were alot of people downtown for a national conference.
Inclusive Language—Talking about People with Disabilities and Disease
His sister is afflicted with polio and muscular dystrophy, so she is confined to a wheelchair.
Your answer: 18. His sister is confined to a wheelchair.
Inclusive Language—Quoting from Biased Material The mayors and their wives were invited on a tour of the state buildings.
Your answer: 19. The political parties and their families were on a tour of the state buildings.
Inclusive Language—Quoting from Biased Material
Back in the 1400s, the laws governing the people were quite specific: “All men shall tithe 10% to the church and pay taxes every six months. All men can attend school until they are 16 years of age.”
Your answer: 20. No Change
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Answers
Answered by
Ms. Sue
The first six are correct. :-)
# 7 shouldn't have a comma. Two words joined by "and" don't have a comma between them.
# 8 is correct.
# 9 should have a period, dash, or semicolon between the two clauses.
#s 10-16 are correct. :-)
# 17 could be:
People who are blind were downtown for a conference.
# 18 is correct.
# 19 should be:
The mayors and their spouses were invited on a tour of the state buildings.
# 20 is correct.
# 7 shouldn't have a comma. Two words joined by "and" don't have a comma between them.
# 8 is correct.
# 9 should have a period, dash, or semicolon between the two clauses.
#s 10-16 are correct. :-)
# 17 could be:
People who are blind were downtown for a conference.
# 18 is correct.
# 19 should be:
The mayors and their spouses were invited on a tour of the state buildings.
# 20 is correct.
Answered by
Anonymous
Thanks for the help
Answered by
Ms. Sue
You're very welcome. :-)
Answered by
CulAdam
I think #2 should read as follows:
When oranges are fresh, eating them can often keep away the cold virus.
If you keep it as, "When oranges are fresh they can often keep away a cold virus," it makes it sound as if the oranges themselves keep away the cold virus. Eating the oranges keeps away the virus, not the oranges themselves.
When oranges are fresh, eating them can often keep away the cold virus.
If you keep it as, "When oranges are fresh they can often keep away a cold virus," it makes it sound as if the oranges themselves keep away the cold virus. Eating the oranges keeps away the virus, not the oranges themselves.