Question

Ms. Sue, I have to ask for your opinion on this. Which introduction sounds better.

I awakened from my dream, and found myself to be sweating.

I awakened from my dream sweating.

I awoke from my dream with sweaty skin.

I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe~ Or: I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and completely sweaty skin.

Have you ever caught a flu during your dream? Where you just wake up in sweat and your stomach is in great pain?

Answer 1

I like this one best:

I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe. It oozed out of pores I didn't know I had.

Answer 2

Thank You Ms. Sue:-)

Answer 3

i awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe

Answer 4

Ms. Sue the title I have is as you know, :Sick all over. Which title do you prefer more. Sick all over or Under the weather. your ideas would be appreciated, as well, thanks

Answer 5

Sick all over is much better.

Answer 6

thanks:-)