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The Ceratosaurus lived about 145 to 161.2 million years ago, in the late Jurassic period. The Ceratosaurus lived in North America, usually around Allosaurus’s and Torvosaurus’s. Ceratosaurus fossils were found near water, this shows that the Ceratosaurus probably lived near bodies of water. Since the Ceratosaurus had and lived near water sources, it was likely that it could swim in water due to its crocodile like tail. This would help in catching food for the Ceratosaurus.

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Here’s a revised version of your text with grammatical errors corrected and repetitive phrasing reduced:

The Ceratosaurus lived about 145 to 161.2 million years ago during the late Jurassic period. It inhabited North America, often in proximity to Allosaurus and Torvosaurus. Fossils of Ceratosaurus have been found near water, indicating that it likely lived close to bodies of water. Given its crocodile-like tail, the Ceratosaurus may have been able to swim, which would have aided in catching food.

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Here are the grammatical errors and instances of repetition identified in your original text:

Grammatical Errors:

  1. Punctuation:

    • "Ceratosaurus fossils were found near water, this shows..." should be split into two sentences or connected with a semicolon.
  2. Unclear Pronoun Reference:

    • The phrase "having and lived near water sources" is awkward and should be simplified for clarity.

Repetitive Phrasing:

  1. Repetition of "Ceratosaurus": The term "Ceratosaurus" is used multiple times in close proximity. It can be reduced or replaced with pronouns to improve flow.

  2. Similar Ideas:

    • The ideas of living near water and the ability to swim are mentioned in overlapping phrases. This could be condensed for clarity.

Suggested Edits:

  • Use synonyms or pronouns to reduce how often "Ceratosaurus" is mentioned.
  • Combine sentences or restructure them to eliminate redundancies, particularly regarding swimming and habitat.

By addressing these points, the passage can be made clearer and more engaging.