The best revision that minimizes clutter while maintaining clarity is:
C. Mrs. Baxter teaches life science, health, and sometimes physical education.
Read the sentence.
Mrs. Baxter teaches life science and health and sometimes physical education at times.
The sentence above is cluttered with too many words and phrases. Which of the following correctly revises the sentence?
A.
Mrs. Baxter at times teaches life science and health and physical education.
B.
Mrs. Baxter teaches life science and at times, physical education.
C.
Mrs. Baxter teaches life science, health, and sometimes physical education.
D.
Mrs. Baxter teaches life science, physical education, and sometimes health.
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is that correct
Yes, option C is correct. It effectively conveys the information in a clear and concise manner by listing the subjects Mrs. Baxter teaches, with "sometimes physical education" indicating that it is not a regular subject she teaches. It eliminates unnecessary repetition and maintains clarity.