Despite high-tech special effects of today's violent horror movies it does not create the emotional impact it did on the classic horrors films of the early 1900s.
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Is this a good thesis statement
Essentially it's a good thesis statement.
However, since the antecedent (effects) is plural, the pronouns that refer to it should also be plural.
Despite high-tech special effects of today's violent horror movies THEY DO not create the emotional impact OF THE EARLY 1900s classic HORROR films.
However, since the antecedent (effects) is plural, the pronouns that refer to it should also be plural.
Despite high-tech special effects of today's violent horror movies THEY DO not create the emotional impact OF THE EARLY 1900s classic HORROR films.
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