Question
Which change, if any, shows the best way to revise the underlined text?
Henson had learned many helpful things from the Eskimos. He used what he learned to help keep the men alive!
M. Some people say that Henson more-or-less helped keep the men alive.
P. The skills that Henson had learned from the Eskimos helped the men stay alive.
R. In order to help the men stay alive, Henson thought about the things he learned from the Eskimos.
S. No change
Henson had learned many helpful things from the Eskimos. He used what he learned to help keep the men alive!
M. Some people say that Henson more-or-less helped keep the men alive.
P. The skills that Henson had learned from the Eskimos helped the men stay alive.
R. In order to help the men stay alive, Henson thought about the things he learned from the Eskimos.
S. No change
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The best revision for the underlined text is option **P**: "The skills that Henson had learned from the Eskimos helped the men stay alive."
This option is clear, concise, and directly relates Henson's skills from the Eskimos to the outcome of keeping the men alive, effectively maintaining the original meaning while improving clarity.
This option is clear, concise, and directly relates Henson's skills from the Eskimos to the outcome of keeping the men alive, effectively maintaining the original meaning while improving clarity.
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