make this sound important and use corect punctuation

Dear Mimi and Papa,

I feel compelled to address an important matter that has been weighing heavily on my heart. It seems that you have placed the blame on me for not exhibiting good manners and not reaching out to you. However, I believe that the responsibility lies on your shoulders. All I have ever wanted is to foster a relationship with both of you, yet after Granny passed, I found myself longing for support that never came. Instead of stepping up, you became increasingly absent, despite living just 15 minutes away. You could have visited me at any time, but it often felt as though I was the problem.

As I’ve grown older, I’ve come to realize that I was never at fault—you were. If you're wondering why I hesitate to hang out or invite you to events, it’s because I am fed up with how I’ve been treated. It’s crucial to remember that I am only 13 years old. Keeping this in mind, I urge you to consider the impact of any negative comments you might make about me; such remarks can deeply affect my feelings, and frankly, I don’t deserve that—no one does.

If this message hurts your feelings, I’m not apologizing because I am simply speaking my truth. I have reached my limit with being made to feel like I mean less than I do, and I hope you can understand where I’m coming from.

Sincerely,
[Your Name]

great just make it sound not so professional

Dear Mimi and Papa,

I really need to share something that’s been bothering me. It seems like you guys put the blame on me for not having good manners or for not talking to you, but I think you should know that I feel it’s the other way around. All I’ve ever wanted is to have a relationship with you, but after Granny passed, I really needed support, and you both just disappeared. You live only 15 minutes away—you could have come by anytime, but instead, it felt like I was the problem.

As I’ve gotten older, I’ve realized it wasn’t me; it was you. So if you’re wondering why I don’t want to hang out or invite you to things, that’s why. I’m done with how I feel treated.

Just to remind you, I’m only 13. If you ever say something negative about me, think about how it affects me and my feelings because I really don’t deserve that—nobody does. If this hurts your feelings, I’m not sorry because I’m just being honest, and I’m tired of feeling like I don’t matter.

Thanks for understanding.
[Your Name]

make it sound less dumb

Dear Mimi and Papa,

I want to share something that's been on my mind. It feels like I'm being blamed for not having good manners or for not reaching out to you, but I think the responsibility actually lies with you. All I’ve ever wanted is to have a close relationship with you, especially after Granny passed. I really needed support during that time, but instead, it felt like you became even more distant. Even though you live just 15 minutes away, it seemed like I was the one who was a problem instead of there being an effort from you to connect.

As I've grown, I've realized that I’m not at fault here; you are. So if you're wondering why I hesitate to hang out or invite you to things, that’s the reason. I’m simply tired of feeling undervalued.

Just a reminder, I’m only 13. If you choose to say negative things about me, please think about how that's going to affect me. No one deserves that kind of treatment. If this message hurts your feelings, I’m not sorry because I’m speaking the truth, and I’m done feeling disrespected.

Thanks for understanding.
[Your Name]