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Question

Urban Factory Workers: factory workers lived in a rapid changing environment characterized by Citys, which brought new cultures and lifestyles. While some found opportunity, others faced overcrowding and harsh living conditions, leading to a sense of alienation.

Answer 1

Your passage conveys an important idea about the experiences of urban factory workers, but it could be improved for clarity and grammatical correctness. Here’s a revised version:

"Urban Factory Workers: Factory workers lived in a rapidly changing environment characterized by cities that brought new cultures and lifestyles. While some found opportunities, others faced overcrowding and harsh living conditions, which led to a sense of alienation."

Key changes made:

1. Changed "rapid changing" to "rapidly changing."
2. Corrected "Citys" to "cities."
3. Changed "opportunity" to "opportunities" for consistency with the plural.
4. Replaced "leading" with "which led" for better grammatical structure.

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