I need 80 words what can I say to my classmate who wrote this:

In chapter 28 it discusses ways to generate ideas and one of the ways I will use from chapter 28 is talking. Talking to other people helps me a lot when it comes to writing. When talking to people it's easy for me to come up with ideas. It's harder for me to write if I don't talk to someone about my ideas for writing something. Talking with my sister is very helpful throught the brainstorming process. She give me feedback on my ideas. I also feel that talking with someone about writing an essay helps you express your ideas.

In chapter 29 it talks about how a good writer organizes their ideas. The techinque I will use for my introduction is by starting with something that will provoke readers interest. I will also try to make everything in my short story essay as clear as possible. I feel that by starting with something that provokes the reader will catch their attention and make them more intrested in the story. I feel this way because when I read a story and it starts with some thing that porovokes me it makes me more interested in the story. The techinque I will use for my conclusion of my short story essay is restating my main point. I feel like restaing my main point will help to get my point acrossed even more. Restating my main point is something that i have always felt like it helps get the point across even more.