Which revision would help the paragraph use more sensory language?

Question

(1 point)
Responses

adding “hot” before “oven”
adding “hot” before “oven”

adding “of warm pumpkin and spices” after “smell”
adding “of warm pumpkin and spices” after “smell”

adding “impatiently” after “waited”
adding “impatiently” after “waited”

adding “red-handed” after “caught Laya”
adding “red-handed” after “caught Laya”

Answer 1

The revision that would help the paragraph use more sensory language is:

adding “of warm pumpkin and spices” after “smell”

This addition incorporates specific scents, which enhances the sensory experience for the reader.