Question
In the sentence above, the writer is considering replacing "people" with "pilgrims." Should the writer make this revision?
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1 point
Yes, because it further emphasizes that the guests were members of a limited group of people who were visiting the museum.
Yes, because "pilgrims" is a more descriptive word than "people" and is therefore a better choice.
No, because it unnecessarily repeats information that was established earlier in the essay.
No, because it makes an unnecessary and unrelated connection between the guests of the museum and pilgrims.
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1 point
Yes, because it further emphasizes that the guests were members of a limited group of people who were visiting the museum.
Yes, because "pilgrims" is a more descriptive word than "people" and is therefore a better choice.
No, because it unnecessarily repeats information that was established earlier in the essay.
No, because it makes an unnecessary and unrelated connection between the guests of the museum and pilgrims.
Answers
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The best option is:
**No, because it makes an unnecessary and unrelated connection between the guests of the museum and pilgrims.**
Replacing "people" with "pilgrims" could imply a specific connotation or context that may not be relevant to the description of museum guests.
**No, because it makes an unnecessary and unrelated connection between the guests of the museum and pilgrims.**
Replacing "people" with "pilgrims" could imply a specific connotation or context that may not be relevant to the description of museum guests.