Lisa's revised thesis: Adopting a pet from a shelter is beneficial because it saves the animal's life, helps control pet overpopulation, and reduces expenses.
Help Lisa rewrite her thesis statement so that it uses parallel structure.
Lisa’s thesis: Adopting a pet from a shelter is beneficial because of saving the animal’s life, to help control pet overpopulation, and it saves money.
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okay but now give it to me after making a Thesis Using Parallel Structure
Sure! Here’s a revised thesis statement that maintains parallel structure:
"Adopting a pet from a shelter is beneficial because it saves a life, controls pet overpopulation, and reduces costs."