Sentence 3 should be revised to make the paragraph more objective. The phrase "he was also the best president" is subjective and reflects a personal opinion rather than an objective statement. A more objective way to phrase it could be to say he was "highly regarded" or "well-respected" among presidents.
Read this paragraph about America’s first president.
[1] George Washington, the first president of the United States, took office on April 30, 1789. [2] Washington took his oath of office in New York City on the steps of Federal Hall. [3] He was the first president, and he was also the best president. [4] He served for two terms.
Which sentence should be revised to make this paragraph more objective?
sentence 1
sentence 2
sentence 3
sentence 4
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