Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, which are their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full, or they won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, which is their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full, or they won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
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Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They dislike how the balloons must be completely full to float. Across the gym, Sam practices the cheer routine; if she doesn't, she risks embarrassing herself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
is all the punctuation correct
Yes, all the punctuation in the revised passage is correct. Each sentence is properly punctuated, and commas are used appropriately to separate clauses and phrases. Here's the passage again for clarity:
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They dislike how the balloons must be completely full to float. Across the gym, Sam practices the cheer routine; if she doesn't, she risks embarrassing herself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
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