Rewrite the following in a correct way

Question

Good evening, my name is Olwethu Mateka, a student at the University of the Free State that took a student loan last year February. I believe last month was the last deduction for my debt as per the remaining interest amount that I was shown at the Standard Bank Branch, so I would like to stop the debit order.

Answer 1

Good evening,

My name is Olwethu Mateka, and I am a student at the University of the Free State. I took out a student loan last February. I believe the last deduction for my debt occurred last month, based on the remaining interest amount I observed at the Standard Bank branch. Therefore, I would like to request that you stop the debit order.

Thank you.