Question
Choose the best revision to the underlined sentences that achieves sentence variety by using complete, controlled sentences.
A. The personnel includes two teams, each with eleven players, and two umpires, whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle that is centered inside an oval.
B. The personnel includes two teams, and eleven players on each team and two umpires whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle, and it is centered inside an oval.
C. The personnel includes two teams, there are eleven players on each team and two umpires whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle, and is centered inside an oval.
D. The personnel includes two teams, with eleven players on each of them. And two umpires whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle, and it is in an oval’s center.
A. The personnel includes two teams, each with eleven players, and two umpires, whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle that is centered inside an oval.
B. The personnel includes two teams, and eleven players on each team and two umpires whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle, and it is centered inside an oval.
C. The personnel includes two teams, there are eleven players on each team and two umpires whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle, and is centered inside an oval.
D. The personnel includes two teams, with eleven players on each of them. And two umpires whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle, and it is in an oval’s center.
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The best revision that achieves sentence variety while maintaining clarity is **A**.
A. The personnel includes two teams, each with eleven players, and two umpires, whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle that is centered inside an oval.
This option effectively uses complete sentences and provides a clear structure without unnecessary conjunctions or fragments.
A. The personnel includes two teams, each with eleven players, and two umpires, whose decisions are absolute. The playing field is a rectangle that is centered inside an oval.
This option effectively uses complete sentences and provides a clear structure without unnecessary conjunctions or fragments.