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We have now set the date for our dad, carl murray Jr.’s second service in Massachusetts. Please see the attached for information.

We are cordially writing to invite you to this memorial service honoring him.

This gathering will allow family, friends, and colleagues to come together to celebrate our father's life and the many ways he touched the lives of those around him. Your presence would mean a great deal to our family as we remember the memories and legacy he left behind.

Please feel free to extend this invitation to others who knew him and may wish to pay their respects.

Thank you for considering joining us on this meaningful occasion.

Note: Confirmation of Tribute Arrangements

We have received several inquiries regarding the arrangements for this service. We are pleased to confirm that we will have a designated station for sympathy cards, gifts, and flowers for drop-off during the service.

Thank you once again for your thoughtful gestures during this time.🙏❤️ God Bless!

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We have scheduled our dad, Carl Murray Jr.’s second memorial service in Massachusetts. Please see the attached details.

You are warmly invited to join us in celebrating his life and the impact he had on those around him. Your presence would be meaningful to our family as we cherish his memories and legacy. Feel free to share this invitation with others who knew him.

Thank you for considering attending this special occasion.

Note: We will have a station for sympathy cards, gifts, and flowers during the service. Your thoughtful gestures are greatly appreciated. 🙏❤️ God Bless!