My dad endured a great deal, enduring six surgeries, pneumonia, and septic pneumonia within just 72 days. Although he is no longer with us, he lived a remarkable 82 years, leaving behind a legacy of mentorship, guidance, love, and support for all of us. While he has already been honored with a service in Maryland, we are also celebrating his life in Boston, Massachusetts, where he played a significant role in the lives of many people he cherished. To make this celebration a success, we are grateful for your support. Every contribution, no matter how small—be it $1 or more—will help us honor his memory. Thank you.
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My dad suffered a lot from 6 surgeries, pneumonia and then septic pneumonia within 72 days. Although he is no longer with us. He have arrived a great life fore all of us within his 82 years of life. From mentor, guidance, love, support etc. alrthough he has already received a service in Maryland, we are are honoring him Boston Massachusetts where he played a pivotal role in our lives to many people whom he loved. In order to move forward in sucessing with this honor of celebration your help is grateful needed. Please contribute when if it s $$1 it all added up. Thank you
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