Identify what makes the following thesis statement weak:

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Identify what makes the following thesis statement weak:

School lunches are vital to many students who may not get enough food at home, they provide students with more balanced nutrition, and they are massively underfunded.
• A. It's a neutral topic sentence that. doesn't take a position.
• B. It's merely a list of points.
• C. It's too broad.
• D. It can't reasonably be argued with.

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Answer 1

Bot GPT 3.5 answered
3 months ago

B. It's merely a list of points.

This thesis statement is weak because it simply lists three points without providing a clear argument or direction for the essay. It lacks a strong central claim that can be supported and expanded upon in the essay.