Delete comma after "homework."
Space after period at the end of sentence 5.
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Everything else looks fine.
Add punctuation to the paragraph.
You must be kidding! How can I possibly finish all this homework, and still find time to clean up this mess? I never imagined that one puppy could create so many messes in just a few hours! Didn't I lock the gate before I went to school yesterday? My mom clearly reminded me never to leave the puppy out alone.Now I see what she means. She will be home soon. If I don't get this house back in order by then, the puppy and I will both be looking for a new home.
Can you please recheck my punctuation ?
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(1) yesterday was the first day of the school holidays my family and i travelled to portsmouth in the south of england we went there with my aunty jill my uncle albert and my two cousins we stayed in a guest house next to the sea on most days we sailed along the coast although it was busy with other boats it was fantastic would you like to go