Improved Comment: "I understand that biology plays a role in development through genetics, but I am curious about how biology specifically influences behavior. Can genetics alone account for all aspects of behavior, or are there other factors at play?"
Things that can be changed:
- Clarifying the question being asked and being more specific
- Acknowledging the role of genetics in behavior
- Being open to the possibility of other factors influencing behavior
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2. Comment: "Here I understand that biology determines development (through genetics) but how does biology determine behavior?"
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