Question
1. Discuss one or more of the ideas to which your comment is connected (for example: elaborate on it, add new information, or ask a question that can stimulate more discussion).
2. Use terminology (vocab) from your field of study where appropriate.
Text:
Understanding social and personality development requires looking at children from thee perspectives that interact to shape development. The first is the social context in which each child lives, especially the relationships that provide security, guidance, and knowledge.
Comments
Ex 1. I like that this doesn't mention any type of relationship but rather just specific qualities of relationships. That's important since we are involved in a myriad of relationships, not just obvious ones like through our parents/friends.
Ex 2. This is a very long-winded and overly complicated way of saying that your experiences influence who you become.
Ex 3. Humans crave relationships with others. It is how we form our sense of self and identity - through the social roles and influences we experience throughout our lives. It would be difficult to study human development without also studying relationships.
How do your rankings align with your holistic assessments of the best and worst comments in Task 1, and why?
2. Use terminology (vocab) from your field of study where appropriate.
Text:
Understanding social and personality development requires looking at children from thee perspectives that interact to shape development. The first is the social context in which each child lives, especially the relationships that provide security, guidance, and knowledge.
Comments
Ex 1. I like that this doesn't mention any type of relationship but rather just specific qualities of relationships. That's important since we are involved in a myriad of relationships, not just obvious ones like through our parents/friends.
Ex 2. This is a very long-winded and overly complicated way of saying that your experiences influence who you become.
Ex 3. Humans crave relationships with others. It is how we form our sense of self and identity - through the social roles and influences we experience throughout our lives. It would be difficult to study human development without also studying relationships.
How do your rankings align with your holistic assessments of the best and worst comments in Task 1, and why?
Answers
GPT 3.5
In my holistic assessments of the best and worst comments in Task 1, I would rank Ex 1 as one of the best comments. It adds a new perspective by highlighting the importance of specific qualities of relationships rather than just focusing on the type of relationship. This enhances the discussion by emphasizing the diverse nature of relationships that contribute to social and personality development.
On the other hand, I would rank Ex 2 as one of the worst comments. While it attempts to simplify the concept of how experiences influence development, it oversimplifies and dismisses the complexity of the topic. Social and personality development is influenced by a multitude of factors beyond just experiences, and it is important to acknowledge and consider these nuances in discussions about development.
Ex 3 would fall somewhere in the middle of the rankings. While the comment effectively emphasizes the significance of relationships in shaping one's sense of self and identity, it lacks depth and does not fully engage with the different perspectives that interact to shape social and personality development. It could benefit from further elaboration and integration of relevant concepts from the field of study to enhance the discussion.
On the other hand, I would rank Ex 2 as one of the worst comments. While it attempts to simplify the concept of how experiences influence development, it oversimplifies and dismisses the complexity of the topic. Social and personality development is influenced by a multitude of factors beyond just experiences, and it is important to acknowledge and consider these nuances in discussions about development.
Ex 3 would fall somewhere in the middle of the rankings. While the comment effectively emphasizes the significance of relationships in shaping one's sense of self and identity, it lacks depth and does not fully engage with the different perspectives that interact to shape social and personality development. It could benefit from further elaboration and integration of relevant concepts from the field of study to enhance the discussion.