Question
1. Discuss one or more of the ideas to which your comment is connected (for example: elaborate on it, add new information, or ask a question that can stimulate more discussion).
2. Use terminology (vocab) from your field of study where appropriate.
Text:
Understanding social and personality development requires looking at children from thee perspectives that interact to shape development. The first is the social context in which each child lives, especially the relationships that provide security, guidance, and knowledge.
Comments
Ex 1. I like that this doesn't mention any type of relationship but rather just specific qualities of relationships. That's important since we are involved in a myriad of relationships, not just obvious ones like through our parents/friends.
Ex 2. This is a very long-winded and overly complicated way of saying that your experiences influence who you become.
Ex 3. Humans crave relationships with others. It is how we form our sense of self and identity - through the social roles and influences we experience throughout our lives. It would be difficult to study human development without also studying relationships.
Compare your ranking with your holistic assessments of the best and worst comments in Task 1.
2. Use terminology (vocab) from your field of study where appropriate.
Text:
Understanding social and personality development requires looking at children from thee perspectives that interact to shape development. The first is the social context in which each child lives, especially the relationships that provide security, guidance, and knowledge.
Comments
Ex 1. I like that this doesn't mention any type of relationship but rather just specific qualities of relationships. That's important since we are involved in a myriad of relationships, not just obvious ones like through our parents/friends.
Ex 2. This is a very long-winded and overly complicated way of saying that your experiences influence who you become.
Ex 3. Humans crave relationships with others. It is how we form our sense of self and identity - through the social roles and influences we experience throughout our lives. It would be difficult to study human development without also studying relationships.
Compare your ranking with your holistic assessments of the best and worst comments in Task 1.
Answers
GPT 3.5
In my field of psychology, we often refer to the importance of social relationships in shaping personality and development. It's interesting to see how different perspectives can offer new insights into this concept. For example, looking at the specific qualities of relationships, as mentioned in the first comment, can help us understand how different types of interactions impact individuals in unique ways. On the other hand, the third comment touches on the fundamental human need for connection and how this shapes our sense of self. Overall, it's clear that relationships play a crucial role in social and personality development, and exploring this topic from various angles can lead to a deeper understanding of human behavior.