Question
1. Discuss one or more of the ideas to which your comment is connected (for example: elaborate on it, add new information, or ask a question that can stimulate more discussion).
2. Use terminology (vocab) from your field of study where appropriate.
Text:
Understanding social and personality development requires looking at children from thee perspectives that interact to shape development. The first is the social context in which each child lives, especially the relationships that provide security, guidance, and knowledge.
Comments
Ex 1. I like that this doesn't mention any type of relationship but rather just specific qualities of relationships. That's important since we are involved in a myriad of relationships, not just obvious ones like through our parents/friends.
Ex 2. This is a very long-winded and overly complicated way of saying that your experiences influence who you become.
Ex 3. Humans crave relationships with others. It is how we form our sense of self and identity - through the social roles and influences we experience throughout our lives. It would be difficult to study human development without also studying relationships.
Which comment do you think meets all three specific criteria for a good comment? Which comment do you think doesn't meet any specific criteria for a good comment? Compare your ranking with your holistic assessments of the best and worst comments in Task 1.
2. Use terminology (vocab) from your field of study where appropriate.
Text:
Understanding social and personality development requires looking at children from thee perspectives that interact to shape development. The first is the social context in which each child lives, especially the relationships that provide security, guidance, and knowledge.
Comments
Ex 1. I like that this doesn't mention any type of relationship but rather just specific qualities of relationships. That's important since we are involved in a myriad of relationships, not just obvious ones like through our parents/friends.
Ex 2. This is a very long-winded and overly complicated way of saying that your experiences influence who you become.
Ex 3. Humans crave relationships with others. It is how we form our sense of self and identity - through the social roles and influences we experience throughout our lives. It would be difficult to study human development without also studying relationships.
Which comment do you think meets all three specific criteria for a good comment? Which comment do you think doesn't meet any specific criteria for a good comment? Compare your ranking with your holistic assessments of the best and worst comments in Task 1.
Answers
GPT 3.5
I would say that Comment 3 meets all three specific criteria for a good comment. It elaborates on the idea of relationships shaping social and personality development, adds new information about how relationships contribute to our sense of self and identity, and stimulates more discussion by highlighting the importance of studying relationships in human development.
On the other hand, I would say that Comment 2 doesn't meet any specific criteria for a good comment. It oversimplifies the idea presented in the text and doesn't add any new information or stimulate further discussion. It could benefit from expanding on the concept of experiences influencing development or providing examples to support the statement.
On the other hand, I would say that Comment 2 doesn't meet any specific criteria for a good comment. It oversimplifies the idea presented in the text and doesn't add any new information or stimulate further discussion. It could benefit from expanding on the concept of experiences influencing development or providing examples to support the statement.