Can you check these sentences,please?

1) It was too bad you couldn't go skiing with your boyfriend
2)I decorated the Christmas tree with lights, angels, bells, snowmen, ribbon, stars and baubles.
3) Antony succeeds in stirring the crowd against Brutus
4 I reiceved a golf club from my parents for Christmas
5) I took the washing out of the washing machine and I hung it on the washing line to dry

1 answer

Remember -- proper end punctuation -- usually a period.

1 is OK.

2 is OK.

3 -- I'd add "up" after "stirring."

4 is OK -- watch the spelling of "received" (one of the hardest words in Englishy, I think!).

5. Rephrase to get rid of repetition: I took the laundry out of the washing machine, and I hung it on the clothes line to dry.
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