Grabbing a leash as if it were his life insurance policy, Max navigates Will through obstacles that he cannot sense towards the garden entry, which is surrounded by towering buildings. Its rays crossed the horizon by the urban skyline, he could only gauge the time by feeling the temperature, as light was obstructed even at short distances. is this good ?
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Yes, this is good! It sets the scene and creates a sense of urgency and challenge for the characters. It also effectively conveys the atmosphere of the urban environment they are in. Well done!
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