Question

How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counterarguments? For Homelessness and violence against women

Answer 1

What is your thesis?

Please post it -- and we'll be glad to help you find arguments and counterarguments.

Answer 2

What is your thesis?

Here are some websites to help you write a good thesis statement and a good plan or outline to support it:

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/writeproc.html

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/general/index.html

Answer 3

My Thesis Statement is Even though women are considred to be separat from homeless and abused, women that are homeless due to violence because violence that makes a woman become homeless and women are homeless due to violence.

Answer 4

My Thesis Statement is
Even though women are considred to be separat from homeless and abused, women that are homeless due to violence because violence that makes a woman become homeless and women are homeless due to violence.

Answer 5

This doesn't make sense and is not a complete sentence.

Women are separate from homeless and abused what?

I don't understand, sorry.

Answer 6

Even though women are considred to be seperat from volence and being homeless and abused, women are homeless due to violence because violence is what makes a woman become homeless and women are homeless due to violence.

I hope this makes a little more sence.

Answer 7

You need to really simplify this. The phrasing is extremely repetitive.

How about this:

<i>Women who are victims of domestic violence often become homeless.</i>

Everything else you wrote is redundant (unnecessarily repetitive) and wordy.

Now ... what will be your main points to prove that statement true?

Answer 8

That makes more sense. :-)

But you've repeated the same idea two or three times.

A better thesis statement would be:

<b>Many women are homeless because of domestic violence.</b>

You could support this thesis with these statements:

1. Women who are abused want to get away from their abuser.
(<i>You could write about different kinds of violence -- physical violence and verbal abuse</i>)

2. These women often have no money to pay rent for a home.
(<i>You could write about why they have no money.</i>)

3. These women become homeless because they choose to save themselves and often their children.


Please post your ideas -- and we'll be glad to help you write your paper.

Answer 9

Thank you so much.

Donna

Answer 10

You're very welcome. Good luck with your paper!

Answer 11

Rising health care cost. How can I support my thesis with compelling arguments abd counterarguments.

Answer 12

a thesis statement for my topic !
"Battered Women"