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Having a clear claim and effective reasons will help you write your essay.

Be mindful to use evidence that supports your claim and explaining why your evidence is important. How does this evidence support your claim? The evidence in body paragraph 1 and body paragraph 2 support different claims.

Use the linked articles to find the evidence to support your claim.

Make sure that your counterclaim is reasons someone would disagree with you. Consider what is the opposite side of your argument.
12 age essay
Debate On School Uniforms

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5 months ago

Thank you for your feedback. I will work on clarifying my claim and providing more effective reasons in my essay. I will also use evidence from the linked articles to support my claims better. Additionally, I will consider writing a counterclaim that represents reasons someone would disagree with me. I appreciate your guidance and will make improvements accordingly.