3. Which of the following is the best revision for strong verbs in the sentence below?

Mrs. Benoit is the events organizer for a nonprofit organization.
a. Mrs. Benoit does events for a nonprofit organization.
b. Mrs. Benoit organizes events for a nonprofit organization.
c. Mrs. Benoit is the one who creates events for a nonprofit organization.
d. Mrs. Benoit turns out to be the events organizer for a nonprofit organization.

I am going between b and d.....but I'm not entirely sure...Can someone please help me and also explain why that answer is correct!?!?!? PLEASE!!

8 answers

D is very wordy. Go for the concise!
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm
Thank you so much! :)
You're welcome.
his emotional breakdown and tears after telling what happened
Van der Vyver in not s typical south african farmer....
situational
unfeelingly
mrs. benoit organizes events for a non profit organization
Its b
dd and boo are right. The answer to "Which of the following is the best revision for strong verbs in the sentence below?" is (b): Mrs. Benoit organizes events for a non-profit organization.
1-D a white person os a victim of apartheid
2-A heartlessly
3-B mrs Benoit organizes events for a nonprofit organization
1. In "The Moment Before the Gun Went Off," the most ironic thing about Van der Vyver's reaction to the death of the young black boy is...
his emotional breakdown and tears after telling what happened
2. Which of the following sentences best explains the irony implied by this sentence?
Van der Vyver is not a typical South African farmer; he feels remorse and takes responsibility for the accident
3. At the end of "The Moment Before the Gun Went Off," the author reveals the surprising truth about the young black boy's percentage. What type of irony does this represent?
situational
4.The young black callously shot through the negligence of the white man was not the farmer's boy; he was his son.
heartlessly or unfeelingly
5. Over-using to be verbs can weaken a sentence.
true
6. Which of the following is the best revision for strong verbs in the sentence below?
Mrs. Benoit is the events organizer for a nonprofit organization.
Mrs. Benoit organizes events for a nonprofit organization.
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