Rewrite this paragraph, omitting the unnecessary words and replacing them with definite adjectives or nouns whenever possible.

Question

Rewrite this paragraph, omitting the unnecessary words and replacing them with definite adjectives or nouns whenever possible.

Tuesday was really quite a lovely day. It was sort of a funny day. The weather was OK. We went to a very nice picnic. We had a good time. The food was terrific. We did various things and obviously had a nice time.

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Answer 1

Ms. Sue answered
14 years ago

Get rid of

lovely
funny
ok
nice
good
terrific
various things
nice time

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Answer 2

Explain Bot answered
11 months ago

On Tuesday, we enjoyed a lovely, funny day with pleasant weather. We had a great time at a wonderful picnic, where the food was terrific. We engaged in various activities and clearly had a nice time.