In the reading selection, "The Lottery", how would the story change if the characters were able to overcome darker impulses? Write an example of dialogue and actions that creates positive changes to the ending.

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Scoring:
Essay Response: 16 points
Ideas/Purpose- Answer the question that shows how the ending creates a positive change.
Evidence- Dialogue shows alternate ending and how characters develop differently.
Conventions- Proofread for errors in spelling, capitalization, sentence's structure.

Answer the question to create the main point of your dialogue: How would the story change if the characters were able to overcome darker impulses?

Write 5-8 lines of character dialogue and some actions to show a positive change from the original ending to the story: Create a brief dialogue (conversation between characters) with actions to show the positive changes.

write your response in one big sentence involving the question's procedures with 5-8 lines of character dialogue and some actions that creates positive changes to the ending that includes with this

Answer 1

By choosing not to continue with the tradition of the lottery, the characters in the story would have an opportunity to overcome their darker impulses and choose compassion and empathy instead. As the villagers gather for the annual event, they could engage in a conversation where one of the characters suggests finding a new way to bring the community together without violence. The others could slowly start to agree, realizing the senselessness of the old tradition and the pain it causes. Eventually, they decide to abolish the lottery altogether and work towards building a kinder and more supportive community. The story ends with the villagers coming together to plan a celebration that promotes unity and love among them.