Question

Rewrite this in a correct way

Hi guys, this message applies to the whole house. Can everyone please be mindful of the noise inside their rooms as it might disturb your neighbors or the whole corridor. Let's all adhere to the times set noise and don't go past them.

Answer 1

Hello everyone, this message is for all residents of the house. Please be mindful of the noise levels in your rooms as it may disturb your neighbors or the entire corridor. Let's all respect the designated quiet hours and refrain from making excessive noise. Thank you.