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I was also quite taken aback that I was no longer frightened by the story that the book described
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The sentence is correct, but it's also wordy (has more words than needed).
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm
Better: <i>I was also surprised that I was no longer frightened by the story in that book.</i>
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm
Better: <i>I was also surprised that I was no longer frightened by the story in that book.</i>
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